【人教版】高中英语选择性必修第一册: 先驱与远见：探寻袁隆平的精神世界与阅读证据

任务情报 | Mission Brief

A PIONEER FOR ALL PEOPLE 🌾

袁隆平：从田间地头走出的杂交水稻之父

袁隆平，中国最著名的科学家之一。他将一生奉献给了杂交水稻的研究，不仅解决了中国的温饱问题，更惠及了全世界。他的成功源于远见、奉献以及对土地深沉的爱。

武器库 | Core Arsenal

动词搭配不要记错哦：

developed

hybrid rice 🌾

attained

great success 🏆celebrity status 🌟

devoted

his life to agriculture 🚜

perceived

the food shortage ⚠️

避坑雷达 | Grammar Radar

-ing 形式 (动名词) 作主语/宾语

He devoted his time to research rice.

to 是介词，后面应接动名词 researching。

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He devoted his time to researching rice.

✓

Grow rice is a hard job.

动词原形不能直接作主语，需改为 Growing。

✓

Growing rice is a hard job.

✓

I like play games.

like 后面直接加原形。

✓

I like playing games.

like 后面必须加 ing (动名词)。

通行证 | Can-Do Goals

学完本课，你能做到：

描述袁隆平的事迹与精神品质

Describe Yuan Longping's achievements and qualities.

在说明性文本中识别支持性证据

Identify supporting evidence in explanatory texts.

正确运用 -ing 形式作主语和宾语

Use -ing forms as subjects and objects correctly.

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Speaking: Crops & Success

Apart from rice, what are some other important crops in China? What do you know about them? (Wheat, corn, soy...) Work in groups. Have a discussion and prepare a presentation on what qualities make a person successful. (Hard work, vision, devotion...)

A Pioneer for All People

Yuan Longping, known as the 'father of hybrid rice', was one of China's most famous scientists. Deep down, he always considered himself a farmer.

During his youth, Yuan perceived a great need for more food. Seeing people die from the lack of food made him decided to study agriculture.

Yuan conducted research and eventually developed hybrid rice strains that had a much higher yield than conventional rice.

Today, it is estimated that about 60 percent of domestic rice consumption in China is comprised of hybrid strains, and his strains have allowed China's farmers to produce around 200 million tons of rice per year.

Even in his later years, Yuan Longping was still young at heart and full of vision, and everyone was always excited to see what he would dream up next.

展开/折叠全文翻译

袁隆平，被称为“杂交水稻之父”，是中国最著名的科学家之一。在内心深处，他始终认为自己是一个农民。年轻时，袁隆平察觉到社会对粮食的巨大需求。目睹人们因缺乏食物而死，让他决定学习农业。袁隆平进行了研究，最终培育出了比常规水稻产量高得多的杂交水稻品种。如今，据估计，中国国内约60%的水稻消费是由袁隆平的杂交品种构成的，这些品种使中国农民每年能生产约2亿吨大米。即使在晚年，袁隆平依然心态年轻，充满远见，每个人都兴奋地期待着他的下一个梦想。

Step 1: Sentence Construction

Unscramble the sentence below:
连词成句：请将下方的单词重新排列组合成正确的句子。

Step 2: Guided Story

根据阅读材料完成仿写（共10句）。

(1) Hello! My name is . (2) I am years old. (3) I have a sister named Anna. She likes . (4) She also likes because it is beautiful. (5) My brother Jack likes . (6) He needs to do this. (7) As for me, I like . (8) Doing this makes me feel very . (9) I usually do this with my . (10) However, I do not like .

High-Scoring Sample / 高分范文

Developing hybrid rice was Yuan's lifelong mission. He spent decades working in the fields. Attaining high yields was not easy, but he never gave up. He enjoyed observing his plants grow. For him, seeing people have enough to eat was the greatest reward.

Step 3: Look and Write

最终挑战：看图写话，描述图片中人物的活动和爱好。

1. Study (Vision)

2. Field Research

3. Global Impact

4. Legacy

Task: Use the information we learned to write a short paragraph about Yuan Longping's qualities.

Use at least 3 -ing forms as subjects or objects:
1. What was his dream? (Helping.../Providing...)
2. What did he enjoy doing? (Working.../Researching...)
3. What makes him a successful person? (Having vision.../Being devoted...)

中文提示 (Hints)

任务：根据所学内容，写一段话描述袁隆平的优秀品质。

要求：使用至少3个动名词（-ing）作主语或宾语。
参考：Helping others was his dream. He enjoyed researching hybrid rice.

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High-Scoring Sample / 高分范文

Yuan Longping was a man of great vision. Devoting his life to agriculture was his choice after perceiving the hunger of the people. He liked working in the fields better than attending celebrity events. Developing hybrid rice helped solve the food shortage in reality. His success comes from his spirit of persevering in the face of difficulties.

高分詳細解析

✨ 语法运用：精准使用了多种 -ing 形式，如 Devoting, perceiving (介词后), working (及物动词后), Developing (主语)。
📖 关键词衔接：巧妙融入了 vision, reality, shortage 等核心词汇。
📝 逻辑严密：从动机（察觉饥饿）到行动（田间耕作）再到成果（解决短缺），条理清晰。

Step 4: Theme Writing

Writing Task: What qualities make a person successful?

Discuss in groups and write your presentation script. Focus on Supporting Evidence (facts, examples, data). Write at least 80 words:
1. Define success (e.g. Attaining goals).
2. List 2-3 qualities (Vision, Devotion, Perseverance).
3. Provide examples (e.g. Yuan Longping).

中文提示 (Hints)

任务：什么样的人才算成功？

写一份演讲稿。要求：
1. 定义成功（如：实现目标是成功）。
2. 列举品质并提供支持性证据（事实、例子或数据）。
3. 至少80词。

0 / 60 words

High-Scoring Sample / 高分范文

Attaining success requires more than just luck. In my opinion, being devoted to one's dream and having a clear vision are the most important qualities for a successful person.

Take Yuan Longping as an example. He perceived the serious lack of food and decided to study agriculture. His vision was to eliminate hunger. By developing hybrid rice, he changed the reality for millions of people. This fact serves as strong supporting evidence for his success.

To sum up, success is about persevering until you reach your goal.

高分詳細解析

🎯 结构规范：开头提出观点，中间引用袁隆平的例子作为事实支撑，结尾总结，符合说明文规范。
📖 证据充分：提到“解决千万人饥饿”作为支持“远见与奉献”的证据。
✨ 词汇地道：使用了 eliminate hunger, serve as evidence, sum up 等高级表达。

A Pioneer for All People

Step 1: Sentence Construction

Step 2: Guided Story

Step 3: Look and Write

高分詳細解析

Step 4: Theme Writing

高分詳細解析

学情分析 Learning Analytics